orz remix v2

Posted on by

在 far之後，petitguignol 做了一首重新混音的orz（下載）。就 petitguignol 的說法，這個重新混音的版本「與其說是remix，不如說是rebuilt，甚至是reconstructure」。

另外，剛剛隨手把《orz》的歌詞翻譯成了英文，不過這個英文怎麼看都怪怪的：

Lady oh lady, you are what a beauty!
Your hair is like silk, your eyes are shiny.
Each time I think of you, each time I feel XD.

Today oh today, I take all my courage.
If I could beloved, that’s what I am questioning.
However your answer, makes “greater underline less” come to me!

You say I’m a nice guy, what you can say is sorry.
You say I’m a nice guy, you decide my destiny.
You say I’m a nice guy, I feel despair and kneel.
You say I’m a nice guy, what I can do is orz!

2 thoughts on “orz remix v2”

  1. 一些個人的小建議
    “you are what a beauty!” 用what a beauty you are可能不押韻
    可能改成 you are such a beauty!
    或 you are such a hottie! 比較順。
    最後一句可能改成 “all I can do is orz!”或者 “nothig I can do but orz!”
    比較順。

    另外我覺得用過去式會不會比較好？時間上是問過之後發出的感想而不是描述正在發生的故事，雖然說有一句用進行式。

Comments are closed.